!!

Welcome to Two Track Music

Guest/Visitor, welcome to the Two Track Music forum area.  If you're not yet a member here, just click the Register link above to sign up.  It's free, quick, and relatively easy.

Once registered, you will be able to post anywhere in the forums, create topics, ask questions, show off your music, and collaborate with other members to create a new song or musical piece.

You will also be able to view post attachments, which are usually songs in progress or completed songs.  And, you'll have access to our TTM Articles section, which contains a variety of articles on software, hardware, mixing, mastering, and many other topics.  The forum Search option will also be available to you once registered.

Two Track Music is a somewhat 'laid back' community.  Just some good musicians and song writers hanging out, and having a good time.  We're not a high pressure or fast paced site, we just enjoy kicking back and making some music, and having fun while we're doing it.

If that sounds like your kind of place, please join us.  We'd love to have you in the mix.  And yes, pun intended... ;)

Additional Menu

TTM Shoutbox

Last 15 Shouts:

 

agradeleous

Today at 11:55:46 AM
Thanks Joom , I got see what settings I have the camera is 20 mp.
 

combobob

Today at 04:30:12 AM
yeah, sorry for posting that video in the shout out. I will put it in my blog thread.
Getting ready for The Adelaide Fringe Festival.
Bald Eagles shows to do and I am helping out a friend doing his first solo show playing Neil Young, Cat Stevens and Elton John songs. I am loving those old songs.
 

Joom

Today at 01:59:42 AM
Smaller is even better...
 

Joom

Today at 01:58:46 AM
Way too big, Ag.  Max you want to post would be 1024X768...
 

agradeleous

Yesterday at 10:09:01 PM
Joom is 3400x4600 photo to big to post ? Seems Im having issues posting one yes Android again . I will try PC later . Thanks .
 

Smurf

Yesterday at 07:03:45 AM
Enjoyed that Mr CB....and good to hear fro ya.... 8)
 

Joom

January 20, 2019, 05:49:39 PM
I assume everybody knows that once you click play on CB's video that you can scroll to the right and click the full screen icon to watch it in full screen mode...
 

Joom

January 20, 2019, 05:48:15 PM
Good one, Bob.  People were dancing and having a good time.  That's a great band you have there...
 

agradeleous

January 20, 2019, 09:46:34 AM
Nice one CB !
 

combobob

January 20, 2019, 03:43:36 AM
I played 3 shows in December with a band I was in in the 80's-90's. I put together a short video of footage my son took on his iPhone:

 

Joom

January 18, 2019, 08:28:55 PM
Spent the day on computers at a couple hotels, and now have to head to the neighbors to fix their WiFi.  I charge businesses, but I help all the local people for nothing.  They seem to like that...
 

Joom

January 17, 2019, 03:50:46 PM
Well, TTM might be, but probably without me...  ::)
 

agradeleous

January 17, 2019, 03:44:36 PM
You didn't answer the " who's going to be around the longest " part 🤣
 

Joom

January 16, 2019, 11:44:17 AM
Music Banter is two years older than us, and KAE is a year or two older.

And when I said "music website" below, I meant "music forums"...
 

agradeleous

January 16, 2019, 11:36:59 AM
Who's got us beat and who's gunna last the longest ? Lol

Show 50 latest
Welcome, Guest. Please login or register.
January 22, 2019, 12:13:27 PM

Login with username, password and session length

Author Topic: Feb odc redo  (Read 357 times)

0 Members and 1 Guest are viewing this topic.

Offline RedJoker

  • Manager
  • ****
  • Join Date: Apr 2016
  • Posts: 362
  • Karma: 3
  • Yup, I have no avatar
    • View Profile
Feb odc redo
« on: March 09, 2018, 03:22:49 PM »
I didn't like my entry for February so I decided to work on it some more. This is just a phone recording at lunch today to try a few ideas. I think it's heading in a more coherent direction but I'm still not quite happy yet.  I pulled out the last verse and added a bridge.  I'm still not sure about the chorus yet and may start over completely on it.  I'll keep working....    :-[

Original for reference:



new ideas attached below
« Last Edit: March 09, 2018, 04:02:18 PM by RedJoker »

Offline RedJoker

  • Manager
  • ****
  • Join Date: Apr 2016
  • Posts: 362
  • Karma: 3
  • Yup, I have no avatar
    • View Profile
Re: Feb odc redo
« Reply #1 on: March 11, 2018, 02:14:46 PM »
Try #3!!  This is a single take, plugged in acoustic guitar + vocals to try a new feel.  I like it better.


Offline neilmac

  • Original
  • Producer
  • *
  • Join Date: Oct 2013
  • Posts: 2364
  • Karma: 2
  • What?
    • View Profile
    • Album for sale!
Re: Feb odc redo
« Reply #2 on: March 11, 2018, 06:37:32 PM »
I think that works better.....  :)
"If it looks good, you'll see it.If it sounds good you'll hear it. If it's marketed right you'll buy it. But if it's real, you'll feel it"

Offline RedJoker

  • Manager
  • ****
  • Join Date: Apr 2016
  • Posts: 362
  • Karma: 3
  • Yup, I have no avatar
    • View Profile
Re: Feb odc redo
« Reply #3 on: March 11, 2018, 11:43:38 PM »
I think that works better.....  :)

Thanks. My wife didn't care for the fact that I took out "her" verse but agreed that its better without it. Especially with the new bridge.