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Feb odc redo
« on: March 09, 2018, 03:22:49 PM »
I didn't like my entry for February so I decided to work on it some more. This is just a phone recording at lunch today to try a few ideas. I think it's heading in a more coherent direction but I'm still not quite happy yet.  I pulled out the last verse and added a bridge.  I'm still not sure about the chorus yet and may start over completely on it.  I'll keep working....    :-[

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Re: Feb odc redo
« Reply #1 on: March 11, 2018, 02:14:46 PM »
Try #3!!  This is a single take, plugged in acoustic guitar + vocals to try a new feel.  I like it better.


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Re: Feb odc redo
« Reply #2 on: March 11, 2018, 06:37:32 PM »
I think that works better.....  :)
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Re: Feb odc redo
« Reply #3 on: March 11, 2018, 11:43:38 PM »
I think that works better.....  :)

Thanks. My wife didn't care for the fact that I took out "her" verse but agreed that its better without it. Especially with the new bridge.